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你好我是齐文玉。20年专注于中高考英语教学。一个重视“授人以渔”，相信“真诚到永远”的英语老师。
我帮助很多学生在学业上有所成就。
每当看到他们最后以优异的成绩考上了自己理想的重点高中与名牌大学；或者本来对自己缺乏或丧失了学习自信的学生通过我的指导掌握了学习方法，激发了学习英语的兴趣与动力、最终取得理想的成绩。
这正是我热爱教学动力的源泉。
那么如何让自己的英语成绩获得进步呢？
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一、读后续写高分技巧之三
如何进行心理描写
1、开心
A slow smile worked its way across his face and into his eyes.All the people present were enveloped in an atmosphere of joy.
Children were filled with excitement at the thought of visiting Disneyland.
2、难过
Tears welled up in her eyes and began rolling down her cheeks.
Moved by the words, Jack couldn‘t help but burst into tears, feeling guilty about not visiting him more often.
I sank my head in my hands and sobbed bitterly, tasting the salt from the tears that streamed down my face.
3、惊讶
The sudden explosion made her jump out of her skin.His sight was glued to what he had seen, and his eyeballs were likely to fall down.
He tried to grab something to lean against, for he was too astonished to stand still.
When he first saw their new house, Bruno"s eyes opened wide and his mouth made the
shape of an O.
4、紧张
He laughed to cover/hide/conceal his nervousness.
She exhibited slight nervousness as she read the text.
His heart racing, and tears filling his eyes, Jack carefully unlocked the box.
5、期待
They waited anxiously, in expectation of the arrival of the new-born baby.
Tom asked, narrowing his eyes and looking at me curiously.
6、愤怒
The boss exploded with anger when he saw the sales report.
The old man was boiling over with rage at finding himself ignored.
Rage and hate flowed into her and stiffened her spine.
三、上期读后续写练习2范文与解析
1、文章主要大意
在新年前夕，＂我＂没有得到想要的礼物。爸爸不仅没有问及此事，而且要求＂我＂和他一起去远处的邻居 Clark夫人家里送木柴等物品。＂我＂心中充满困惑，最终和爸爸来到了 Clark夫人家。
2、写作方法指导
Paragraph1的开头是：＂Clark夫人打开房门，三个孩子裹在一条毯子里＂......
再结合文章中对 Clark夫人家庭情况以及爸爸来 Clark夫人家的意图的描述可知，本段应该会讲 Clark夫人一家与＂我＂和爸爸的交流，＂我＂跟爸爸把带来的礼物放进屋里面的行动描写，以及 Clark夫人一家的反应。
Paragraph2的开头是：＂我完全明白爸爸给了我一份远远胜过一条裙子的礼物＂。......
因此接下来的内容应该是作者对这次经历的感受，对爸爸的感谢等。
3、写作范文指导
Paragraph 1:
Mrs. Clark opened the door of the house where the three children were wrapped in a blanket. ＂We brought you a few things， ma‘am＂ Dad said，and handed the bags to her. She opened one bag and took out the shoes. And she bit her lower lip to keep it from trembling as tears ran down her cheeks. ＂We brought a load of wood，too. Then Dad turned to me，＂ Elizabeth, let’s heat this place up. ＂Soon the fire worked and everyone was in high spirits. The kids laughed when Dad handed them each piece of candy，and Mrs. Clark also wore a smile.
Paragraph 2:
I understood very well that Dad had given me a gift much greater than a dress. Just now,I saw the three children surrounding my dad，running and laughing.I could see that they missed their dad, and I was glad that I still had mine. Dad gave me the happy look on Mrs. Clark’s face that probably hadn’t been on her face for a long time， the smiles of her three children, and the best New Year memory of my life. I was so grateful that I have got the most valuable I gift for New Year.
四、读后续写写作训练 3
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
9-year-old Igor lived in a huge forest in the north of Russia. His father was a woodcutter and his mother a tailor. The boy liked playing with animals in the forest and knew the names of different birds and their songs. One freezing winter Igor was seriously ill and the doctor from big cities told his parents that only surprise could save him. Lying all day in bed, Igor only wanted his father to catch a bird and played with it. But in winter there were no birds in the forest. “You could make him a bird out of wood,。”suggested the anxious mother.
The first finished birds were fat and too heavy to fly. He threw them into the fire, head in hands.
It was snowing heavily, and he really didn"t know where to find a bird. Then an idea occurred to him, "The bird needs two pieces of wood." Eventually, he made it and showed it to his wife."Beautiful!" she said，taking needle and some thread(细线) and sewing the two ends together, like real bird. She tied a long thread to the bird"s" back. And it could be hung above Igor"s bed. Quietly, the woodcutter hung the bird above the boy"s bed.
At daybreak, his son was watching the bird carefully. There was a light in his eyes for the first time in many weeks. "Beautiful!" said Igor. I"ve never seen it before in the forest. What"s its name?". That"s a good question. I"ll find out and tell you. "The next morning, when the father entered Igor"s room, he found the boy sitting up in bed, trying to touch the bird. The last time Igor sat up in bed was many weeks before. What"s it called?" the boy asked. "Oh, dear, I"m still not sure."
Late on that night, Igor"s father went into his son"s room quietly and made the thread a little shorter. Then the bird was hanging a little higher above Igor"s head. Three days later, he found Igor kneeling on the bed, trying to touch the bird. His hand was very near it. " Have you decided on the name?" Not yet. My son. his father replied.
Paragraph 1:
Again, at night the father went into his son"s room.
Paragraph 2:
Several days later, Igor"s father was cutting wood when he heard a scream from the house.
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