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话题分类
全球化
大作文题目
Some people think that financial aid from international organizations is important for developing countries. Others believe that practical aid is more useful. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.* 杜斯迅老师写作班原题命中
写作思路
本题是经典的“国际救援”考题，属于文化类全球化问题的讨论。写作方向灵活，推荐思路是结合民生问题展开讨论。
重点词汇与语料
international relations 国际关系
fashion 方式
deliver the acts of generosity 慷慨解囊
deprived 贫困的
face up to 勇敢的面对
harsh reality 残酷的现实
typically 代表性地
official incompetence 官员的无能
render 使变得
implement 执行
medical donations 医学捐赠
dedicated 专注的，献身的
eradicate 根除
access to education 受教育机会
bond 结合
moral obligation 道德义务
grant 准允
conduct 实施
参考范文
Up until today, international aid still plays a significant part in international relations, but the way in which it does often comes under discussion. While some might be supportive of financial aid, I would argue that there are more effective fashions to deliver the acts of generosity.
People who are in need of assistance are usually the most deprived in developing countries, and they can barely face up to the harsh reality only with the support from within. Therefore, the idea of receiving financial assistance from international charity organizations is understandable. However, the least developed nations are typically badly governed where corruption and official incompetence are capable of rendering the aid not just useless but rather harmful. In this case, the way it should be implemented needs to be reconsidered.
More practical aid, I believe, can be offered in the field of medical care and education. For example, as a result of medical donations and some dedicated medical teams from overseas, several prevalent diseases have been controlled or eradicated in the poorest communities. With the support of educational resources from international charity organizations, more schools have been set up in those less developed areas, so people there have more access to education, which promotes the development of those places in the long run.
To conclude, in this age of globalization, nations are more closely bonded than ever before, and to help those in great need is a reflection of moral obligation. However, the approach that the assistance is granted should be carefully chosen and conducted.
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