在图片的基础上写作文是考研英语一大作文的常见要求,这里分享的是2019年考研英语大作文的参考范文。图片中两个人在爬山,一个人说“累了,我不爬了”。另外一个人说“别呀!休息一下再接着爬”。 接下来是我写的参考范文。
The Importance of a Strong Will
When we look at the picture, we can see something interesting. Two men are on their way to the top of the mountain. One man says that he is very tired and he wants to give up. Another man says that they should continue after a short rest. The implied meaning of the picture is very clear. It shows us the importance of a strong will.
I believe that a strong will is important for men, women and children. If we have a strong will, nothing can stop us. Madam Curie is a good example of the importance of a strong will. Her discovery of radium was the result of many years of hard work. In those years, she was tired and sometimes she was frustrated. However, she refused to give up. Finally, she discovered radium. The story of Madam Curie shows us the power of a strong will.
In fact, those who have a strong will are tough and strong. That is why they can succeed. Wherever we go, whatever we do, we should always have a strong will.
这是我根据2019年的考研英语一的作文题目而写的参考范文。题目对于字数的要求是160个单词至200个单词。这篇范文的字数是大约180个单词。
重点表达分析:1,这篇作文中第一句话表达比较好,这个句子地用到了when引导的从句,也用到了something interesting 这样的比较有英语特色的好表达。2,这篇作文中使用的those who这个定语从句表达比较好,增加了文章亮点。
作文中也使用了其他的好词和优美的句子,这里就不进行逐一分析,重点分析上述两个表达以做到主次分明。
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